Wow.

I can't put my finger on what it is, but something hit me bery hard in this poem. I really really like it.

Just, wow. Amazing poem.

Thank you for writing this. I know I wish I could help a friend get through it but I just don't know how."eat something, beautiful".

Stan the Nerd

is this dedicated to those that are concerned with ideal image or not? thx for sharing.

That was lovely and inspiring. In an odd way, it makes me recall an old poem of mine [a beauty photographic], though the subject is not similar.

The last line is amazing. So true.

I see this piece as a reminder that everone is beautiful...I used to never eat anything,and I understand how someone could feel that way...Very lovely way to describe the beauty in everyone.

Deep...beautiful...amazing. Keep it up!

i just noticed that you get a whole assload of reviews for each poem, so i looked at them actually this time and noticed that most dont actually go over two lines, rarely there's three, and a lot of times people are advertising thier own poetry...i dont know, i find that odd...random observation...ok, so i just filled up this review with something you probably already know and dont care about...WAH

anywayz, THE POEMi love the ending to this one, definitely makes a statement and i love the tone of voice this one takes, i dont know, struck me really strong, again, very well written, muchly enjoyed, nicely done

Tragically beautiful. Great write ;)

Adore the "so stop chewing on your tongue line." Your use of colour descriptions is lovely, very nice work, tho the ending has been done before and could have packed a bigger punch, in my opinion.-jess

Such a caring piece. Very touching. Awesome write. Thanks for the kind review. God Bless.

Needa S.

oh wow. it's so true, too. wow. it's not joke, either. you did a good job portraying this. ugh. nice work.

the straight forward style was really effective in this poem...excellent job...

truly yours...

All of your work is so BEAUTIFUL. I'm in awe of you. I know, it's kind of weird reading someone gushing about you; but boy, it's true. You have some t-a-l-e-n-t for poetry. I look foward to your other works in great anticipation!

And thank you for the authorfaves... It means bunches.

-Lavandula

That's such a sad pleading poem. The lines in the parenthesis make it especially powerful.

This is so sad, but beautifully written, and haunting as well. I don't think that there's much to say about this poem, because it's just wonderfully done, and I think that it has effectively left it's mark on me and several of your readers. Well done as always, and I'm glad to see that you've done lots of updates while I've been delaying. This is simply wonderful, and don't ever stop writing.

Heather