nice poem. very sweet of you to dedicate it, and a really nice piece overall. it's good that you will address her as beautiful, so that she may see her self-worth and perhaps not look down upon herself so much. :) nice work. keep writing!

THis is realyl beautiful, I hope your friends doing alright. It's great that your their for your friend. I hope it turns out good in the end. You have my pleasent atheist prayers...whatever good that means...

ANNA

wonderful writing :)

wow, i loveed this, it was full of emotion, superbly and wonerfully written, good job.

lovely and gentle coaxing...soothing friendships is felt throughout this poem

The person must be quite the catch for having such a beautiful poem dedicated to themself. The melancholy has several meanings & interpretations-like a photo seen through nion lights, moonlight, etc. etc.

Very realistic & down to earth!

K

So short, yet so powerful. I really enjoyed it, even though it's such a sad subject. The title and the words in brackets were my favorite part of this. And the ending was beautiful. Such a sad subject, but you did a good job with this poem. Great work, thanks for the reviews, and keep writing! :D

very awe inspiring...

i like this. i can relate strongly. I love how you ended by just saying "nothing but bones". btw thanks for the reveiw. keep writing.

O, makes me want to cry. So beautiful and shrouded in terrible sadness.

beautiful, absoulutly beautiful, and quite sad.i hope your friend can battle through.

How very sad and so painfully true. Anorexia has to be one of the most painful things to ever go through. Thankfully I've never had that problem. But I've read several really good poems about anorexia on this web site (including yours.) This gives me such a sad glimpse into the mind of someone who has to deal with this.

I hope I'm not saying any thing insulting here. I'm never good expressing my self, when it comes to this subject.

Wow, this is so beautiful (even though i'm pro-ana). You did a really nice job with this, and I like how you put some words in parenthesis, it really adds something to the piece. You are such a wonderful writer, and I love reading all of your stuff! Seriously, everytime I see an Author Alert from you, I smile and always open that first! hehe

this poem is like a bittersweet taste. sweet in the beginning, then bitter in the last two lines. those last two lines r very solid and powerful.

awesome work as always!

That was just BEAUTIFUL... the last sentence made the impact of this poem more severe. Keep writing, you rock!