Reviews for The Thoughtless Old Man

clockwork kiss 2005-08-01 ch 1,	abuseahh! i understand the meaning perfectly! it's great work. the end is -wonderfully- done. this keeps contradicting itself, but once you read the last stanza you understand why. i really, really liked the 3rd stanza. "And the thoughtless old man, he digs in and draws, green-silver-gold in his head." great writing, especially there. only thing i saw was that "like a bird from a chapel ringing sweet, dark sounds from a tower, high and dark." too me, if the ringing was "sweet", it wouldn't be "dark"... and also you use dark again at the end of the line. maybe some other one-syllable-er? dunno. anyways, fabulous write. loved it.
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-07-06 ch 1,	abuseEchoes of wisdom.
shola 2005-07-03 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. I quite like this
Aslan Israel 2005-05-22 ch 1,	abuseI love the end. I guess it's one of those things where he's lived so long he just can't appeciate anything anymore... Brilliant job on this. Brava.