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| writingforverbecauseitsmyli... 2008-01-07 ch 1, | This is the same thing with me. All my friends hate me for no reason. |
| dustytiger 2005-06-03 ch 1, | and this one's a good one too, i never think to check for your updates till 'ya review something for me, i feel like a bum, you're a great writer keep it up, ex friends can be so annoying sometimes hehe |
| charedice 2005-06-03 ch 1, | im loving the fire/ice metaphor, and this shows more of an idea of where it's going from the start then in, say.. all of my poems. the whole things rad, really |
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands 2005-05-25 ch 1, | yay you have more poems up! i like this one, i knew i would for two reasons - 1. i knew i could realte to it and 2. because it's written by you! really well strucutured and i like the juxtasposing images: "You’re fire, and I’m ice" and all the images in general actually, really cool image maat the beginning especially x weasel within x |
| Trajo 2005-05-22 ch 1, | Umm...that wasn't directed at me was it? Cuz I'm sorry if I seem pushy or something. I don't mean to be. I'm just trying to help, to talk you through things, just to be someone outside that cares...Sorry if this is about me. I don't mean it to. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-05-22 ch 1, | this is good. The words express everything really well. The emotions are strong and they are worded well ~Sorrow~ |