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Reviews For: Leave Me Alone

writingforverbecauseitsmyli...
2008-01-07
ch 1,
This is the same thing with me. All my friends hate me for no reason.
dustytiger
2005-06-03
ch 1,
and this one's a good one too, i never think to check for your updates till 'ya review something for me, i feel like a bum, you're a great writer keep it up, ex friends can be so annoying sometimes hehe
charedice
2005-06-03
ch 1,
im loving the fire/ice metaphor, and this shows more of an idea of where it's going from the start then in, say.. all of my poems. the whole things rad, really
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
2005-05-25
ch 1,
yay you have more poems up! i like this one, i knew i would for two reasons - 1. i knew i could realte to it and 2. because it's written by you! really well strucutured and i like the juxtasposing images: "You’re fire, and I’m ice" and all the images in general actually, really cool image maat the beginning especially x weasel within x
Trajo
2005-05-22
ch 1,
Umm...that wasn't directed at me was it? Cuz I'm sorry if I seem pushy or something. I don't mean to be. I'm just trying to help, to talk you through things, just to be someone outside that cares...Sorry if this is about me. I don't mean it to.
Sorrowful Dreams
2005-05-22
ch 1,
this is good. The words express everything really well. The emotions are strong and they are worded well

~Sorrow~
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