hahahah this is very good :) i like it :)

I think this is harsh, stereotypical and in my opinion wrong. And no offense to you, but its not really poetry, just a bunch of unpoetic statements crammed together... except I do like that last line. I agree, some guys can be like that. But there are a few out there that aren't and I dont think you should just put down the entire male gender because a few of them weren't right for you. Just my opinion. Keep writing.

ouch! harsh! but sometimes true. lol, i liked how it was totally mean but the last line was sort of hopelessly romantic. D

This one is just right. I keep wondering that too. Somehow I don't think we'll ever find out why we still like that same insensitive pig..

nice job..

gooey