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| Gaki Toki 2005-05-23 ch 1,  | abuseFunny, and alas, you said to write more poetry...I can't. Like I said, I'm not a poetry person, I write novels and short stories, poems aren't for me...but thank you for your review anyway. I like this, YOU are the talented one, I can't create such humor without a character speaking to another, I can't create that feeling in the pit of your stomach...you know, that squeezing, tingly effect. Haha, I feel so dumb sitting here saying what I can't do. I don't do it often that's for sure. But here you are, another review for you like you asked. It may not be as long as the other one, but what would I know? I'm not sure how much I write...I just like writing, and rambling...just talking. *sigh* Oh well, that's just me I guess, having these weird almost "conversations" with you on a review...well, there you go, I need therapy. *Hands author cookies* Kudos for your work on this, I love it! Of course I did find a grammatical mistake but do not fear, no one will hold it against you. Sometime I only catch mistakes after I've posted it on here because I look at in in a different font...it's strange. Well, now to quit rambling and leave you some space. Much Love, Gaki Toki |