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| Gaki Toki 2005-05-22 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting, very interesting, short, sweet, to the point. I like it! It delves into the mind but not too far, just enough to get the reader thinking you know? I don't usually reivew poetry, it doesn't appeal to me as much as it does to other people, I'm not much a poet (in my own eyes at least), but I do consider myself a writer, and all writers have something in common. Issues. Haha...I know it's so dumb, sure, everyone has issues, every singel Goddamn person in the world has issues, but we are the only ones with the confidence to write about them. Hmm...judging by the rush of poems on here you've had some of these for awhile, no problem, all it means is that you at least try to let out the emotions stored inside you. Good. through yourself in poetry or through a character in a novel, such as mine, we express ourselves(how cliched), we show the world we're not afraid! Or we show the world how much we really cower from the threats set against us. *sigh* I never thought I could get so much from such a simple yet amazingly deep poem. You may not think it's deep but believe me, once you take classes in how to dig into poems, you can get a solution even bigger than this! You say there's no hope, but in writing things such as this you are creating a doorway for those trapped emotions, and you're wrong, there IS hope, there IS a future. So what if you threw away a chance at never-ending love, life goes on, I sound like such a **, sitting here and telling you to go suck it up, but no...you're strong...you're stronger than those who don't write about it. Much Love, Gaki Toki |