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Reviews For: Goodbye, Dear Friend

Clodhopper
2005-09-14
ch 1,
I was going through some of my cousin's, ColorCrayons, old reviews and saw your name and decided to drop in and have a look at what you have. Since my ADD is getting the better of me today, I didn't have the patience to read anything longer, sorry.

This was very sad, yet extremely well done. I know how you feel in that kind of situation. It's always hard to lose someone, but the best comfort we have is the knowledge that they're not suffering.

You portrayed your emotions very well. I had tears in my eyes by the last sentence.

~Ty
Chase William
2005-05-22
ch 1,
Wow; very realistic, very sober. The emotions are captured well. Great job.
dragonelemental
2005-05-22
ch 1,
I really loved it, it was very somber, i had tears in my eyes at the end. Have you really lost someone as close to you as this suggests? I hope not. This is a really amazing piece to write in someones memory though, without ever knowing them i admire the person. Well done.
Blonde Babi
2005-05-22
ch 1,
i love thsi tsory. it shows what really goes on. i haev te same problem. my friend wasnt supposed to die but he did. so this shows everything what pl go through. everyone rites abotu anger andstuff but you write what reely goes on. it gives out teh illusion of a sad feeling while others dont. so keeo riting plz!
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