|Reviews for Pretending|
| kloun mannequin 8/20/10 . chapter 1
it's so annoying how people do things to get attention, I like this.
| Stormie Greye 8/19/06 . chapter 1
Huh, true true. It's such a sad fact that sometimes you have to be this way for people to pay attention to you. The title went perfectly, by the way. Nice.
| LaDameNoir 6/26/05 . chapter 1
Omg... i hate you... i wish i could write like that. THe poem was simple, to the point, and it just leaves you with that serernish sadish pensiveish feeling. again, i hate you, but in the good way.
| WickedSilence 6/24/05 . chapter 1
I thought this was a very well written poem. You managed to infuse it with a lot of imagery without forcing the flow. The only word I did not understand was "alar" in the second to last staza, line 4. Otherwise, good poem. Keep writing!
| MageDay 6/9/05 . chapter 1
I always look for good use of imagery, and this poem is a great example. Good job!
| CrystalIceDragon07 5/28/05 . chapter 1
wow this is awesome! make another poem!
| SportylilChica 5/28/05 . chapter 1
This is beautiful...Great job. You have a unique way of writing and make it seem so beautiful and tranquil. Amazing job!
| Werewolf Nighteyes 5/26/05 . chapter 1
Hauntingly real in many ways. Your choice of words is nothing short of awesome, and I especially liked the final two lines. It closes the poem wonderfully. Great job here.
| elasandra 5/22/05 . chapter 1
Very well done. just love u're poetry and u're writing. It's very...rhythm like. easily flowing, very smooth. Can feel the emotions in the writing. wonderful. Keep up the great work!
| Cloud Burst 5/22/05 . chapter 1
great word play and nice rhyming going on there! i just dunno bout the word [alar]... great work, keep it up!
| Areida Hollyoak 5/22/05 . chapter 1
hello! mostly to say thanks for the review and correction its not my best, heh.
nice piece. rather trite topic but you held it well, i like the 'repeat' at the end. rue underlay is a nice line, nice concept.
not bad, keep it up (: