Aw, cute and sweet. The first positive poem I've seen in a while. People need to know they're appreciated sometimes. Good job.

~Leeona Trance

that was very good. It had a nice message. it says a lot in a good simple couple of lines, and you have a nice way of conveying your message.keep up the good work!~starflames

that was very sweet

except

what about those who arent seen

who arent idolized

who do not wake up every morning knowing that little kids want to grow up to be them when they grow up

no one ever makes a hero out of a migrant worker

they make themselves the heros just be surviving in a land when they are constantly being pushed down by society

what about the steel worker

is he not a hero because he can feed his family everynight

who idolizes him

they should

they are who keep you safe

the army may keep your mind safe though

from all their foes

making sure you dont get any ideas

of how this system might not work

of how sometimes things need to move left in order to move forward

i do appreciate the very nice and sweet sentiment on your part towards firefighters and police officers

ps a woman can be a doctor o yes she can

but will she get the same pay as a man

i dont think so

because people refuse to let go

This is a very good poem. Keep sharing!

I love that you are able to see the many choices...and put it to words. nicely done.

kool poem! i like ur repetetive beginnings, really adds something to ur poem. great work