i know that u haven't writen on this story in a long time but i think u have something great on ur hands here and should continue with it. granted i should take my own advice and word on my own stuff, i just think that this story has alot of potential. if u want i could point u in a good direction of where to take the story (having thinking about it for a while when i should be doing other things). my point is this, ur story is good u just need to finish it.
im willing to help if u need it.
~Miss Spendin'

i know its been like ... a year almost a year and half since you've updated this one but i've always had this story in mind, i dont know why, i think its because i have a story like this one, (not exactly the same, the only thing they have in common its that its about vampires and the protagonist's name is Lily) and i've always been curious to know as to what happens next. please dont give up! as we say here in Puerto Rico "yo voy a ti!!" it means I'm rooting for you!! take care, God bless.

update soon, PLEASE! *begs*

oh joy! a review! great chapter!! hope you can update soon. ;o)

Intense!! XD

please update soon i really like your story.(oh and please update your other stories too please)

i'm really into vampires but i wont start babbeling it would probably annoy you.

well please update soon and i wish u luck on your writing!

o0oo! i like this story! I never actually read a vampire story ((blushes)) but i LOVE Chris. he's awsum. Anywho please update soon? even if this chapter is short, i enjoyed it loads (and the rest of this story for that matter!) again, please please please please update!Truly,Joker is Poker with a J

hehe. after i read your story "Torn Apart", i wanted to see if you wrote any other stories. i luv this one too! ok, next story...lol

Bout damned time you updated, grr, lol. And yes, you can call me KemKem, just not in front of everyone else. Lol. Now hurry and update!

I loved this chapter. Love love love love it. and I love the response to my review. lol. I can't wait for more!! More more more!

reviews for you! *hand cookies through screen* that too. my muse Erik sends his regards and hopes that you update soon. If you are wondering who Erik is, try my profile under the same name at FanFiction.net...aww, Chris is having second thoughts, aw about Lily!! (tries not to imagine self in story) yep, that's going to be hard.

I definitely haven't met many who know what Vampire the Masquerade is. This is an interesting story thus far, Christoph(one of my favorite names) is a likeable character as is Lily. I look forward to the next chapter, please do keep it up. Kembryan Strife

whoa...this is AWESOME! Oh this is Sara's friend Caitlin! Anyway I love this story keep going PLEASE! I love the kind of stories where the twin/older bro watches out for their sister...*shrugs* keep going! Love the writing...W0!

Cait

Now I'm excited! Lol. I'll check out ur fanfics now that you've made me so excited. I really liked this chapter and I liked the scene where they're in his house. It's a cute story, but i hate Brad so much that I wish the vampires would eat him. Or maybe Crystal while they're at it. I love how they got all excited when she said her mother was France. lol.

Can't wait for the next update

Kimmi

yay! long chapter! i loved it! Tell Brad to get his hands off her! She belongs to Chris *okay, maybe I'm going a little off the deep end* You should read Companions of the Night by Vivian Vande Velde. I loved it! okay, take care! hope you update soon!!