Excellent-- beyond description. Your work speaks for itself and should stand alone in this instance. Just know we all stand back and heave a great sigh at the simplistic beauty of it.

wow. *stares at screen* you are definetly going on my favourite authors lsit :)

Very good, awesome write.

I can relate to this a lot, I guess we all realise the changes that have been taking place. Well done indeed.

I liked this, very simple and though it was depresing, I enjoyed it. Keep writing.

Quite a nice haiku.Just a little depressing,But nice nonetheless.

simplicity at its best. i love haiku. its wonderful

not a very optimistic view of life on earth, lol. great work!

Mra.Its ok, but it doesnt echo.It seems...hollow. Missing spirit.Something like that?Good idea though

Wow, I really like this one. Nice job.

Life is often pessimistic, and I wonder at those who can say the glass is half full. And then other times I am completely enveloped by joy and cannot consider any moment without.

not bad and pretty well done. I liked it, very nice concept and beautifully done.

!~* noelle *~!