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| marshbar960 2005-09-07 ch 1,  | abuseyou are an angel in disguise and you want people to love and respect you for who you are. thanks for sharing and keep writing! p.s. God loves you and so do I! |
| ittybittytreefrog 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseInteresting use of oxymoron, but your dictionary warning really worries me. If you use a word assuming no one else will know it, chances are you're not speaking in your own real voice. You don't need to use fancy vocabulary to sound impressive and using big words doesn't necessarily make a poem good. |
| Richelle LeKire 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseAh. You are a Noah's ark poet. Adjetives come two by two!Otherwise, I think it was pretty good. |