| Reviews for The Wallflower |
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SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 13 Ohh...That would be perfect...Goes to France, walks in on Adele and Adam, they're getting married, returns home, realizes he loves Jenny, then marries her... Let's see how well this story fits my happily ever after... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 12 Yay! Thank goodness for no-nonsense-practical mothers...There would be many a lonely girl without them... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 11 Oh...That's so sad...I'm tearing up...That was so brutal...And you can see the pain on both sides... I completly forgot that we'd read the whole "With you" and all that...I'd forgotten about Mia and the fact that that was her friend from then and all...Luke and Caitlyn seem like such different characters now...I keep forgetting their the young lovebirds we read about... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 10 Darn it...Why can't boys think with their brains once in awhile? Blast...Guys like Michael don't really ditch girls after they do something like that... Poor Derek...Doesn't know what's happening with her and she can't send him a note explaining... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 9 He took her hand! *squeals in delight* Ok so it's not really for the reasons I would have liked, but they're still holding hands aren't they? And that sneak peek is hard to ignore...but I have the next chapter...So I'm trying not to read ahead... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 8 Ah...Derek's serious about their relationship...How sweet... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 7 I'm starting to hope Michael ends up with Adele less and less...In fact, I'm really just hoping he finds someone else, preferably Jenny... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 6 Hehehehe...*rubs her hands together in childish glee* seems Michael has a soft spot for Jenny...And Miss Adele just appeared to liven things up... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 5 How cute...He's pleasantly surprised...As in not totally mortified or upset that she's there...I dare say he's rather happy to see her...And now everytime I think (as in the voice in my head that is my thoughts), I hear some elderly british man...Kinda like the butler's always sound in the movies...It's that 'dare say' that did it... |
SkepticCritic 10/10/06 . chapter 4 Poor thing...He barely knows her and he's already trying to get her off his mind...Doesn't seem like he's succeeding terribly well either...Only when he's engrossed in business-like matters... I know you're not going to respond to this, but I can't help but wonder if you like happily-ever-after's for everyone...'Cuz I'd really like Michael to find a nice girl to settle down with...Not neccessarily little Miss. French and not neccessarily Jenny (though it'd be kinda cute) but...I still like happily ever afters... |
SkepticCritic 10/9/06 . chapter 3 I so vote for kiss...That's just 'cause I'm a romantic though...Just like Mrs. Whats-her-name from 'with you'...the one who wanted them to kiss... |
SkepticCritic 10/9/06 . chapter 2 Hehehehehe...Whoa...Luke and Caitlyn are six years apart...But Derrek and Lita are eight years apart...But age didn't matter as much then did it? Must've been nice...Course you also didn't have the whole thing with dating minors...And it wasn't wierd to see 60 year olds marrying 18 year olds...Gross as that is... Sorry...Randomly rambling... And I kinda like Derreck...He's a little aggravating...But he's not in it for money...He just wants a wife... |
SkepticCritic 10/9/06 . chapter 1 Alrighty...So it only took me forever to get around to reading these other stories...I could've sworn I already started this one but I didn't see any reviews so... I'm terribly glad you've already told us his name...I'll enjoy the story so much more now that I now who she'll end up with...Well that and now that I know she will end up with someone...It always makes stories more enjoyable when you're positive there's a happy ending... |
sexyz-bratz 8/18/06 . chapter 17it was such a cute story! i cant wait to see the rest of the Evencort family! |
Kylie1403 8/4/06 . chapter 17So was Lady Featherington Caitlyns friend? or was that ajoke |