DUDE! this story rocks! I love how the brothers are fighting over a girl, aahahah I laugh =p. Anyway, I think you should REASLLY update. =D

I was just reading any random story and came across your story. This is a really good story. Mostly what I've read Mika is having hard time deciding between two guys. I'll finish reading the other two chapter later.

so good. i like takai more! update soon please!

Woah.

Major wake-up slap here.

After so many weeks of cliches, I am more than ecstatic to read this.

I don't think there's a better fantsy story than this for me to start reverting to. And that's the highest compliment I can give.

You're practically doing the writing for me, you know. Not that I'm saying anything - just that I've had roughly the same idea for nearly 3 years now, and it's killing me that I can't seem to write it out properly. Don't ask me why - I just can't do it.

Thank you SO MUCH. If this isn't a good story worth reading and holding onto until the end of time, I don't know WHAT is.

Ops. I think I just sounded corny and lame.

Anyways, just continue. Don't stop halfway - like me - or go completely insane - like me. Take as long as you need to for every chapter, I don't really mind so long as there's something good in this place to read.

Thank you again.

Are the two brothers demons? I really like the story so far, but the only thing that annoys me is the personality mix up. Hana is the one who is usually outgoing and chirpy, right? And Midori is the one who pretty much 'blends' into the backround type person. Since when did Midori follow her sister's personality example?

Anyways, keep writing! I really like it!

cute story!

hi, i just discovered your story today and i liked it so much that even though i'm sick, i sat here for 2 hours and read it all while trying to talk to my friend, wait for my boyfriend to call (he never did...waah), and listen to music. i LOVE it. it's AWESOME! plz oh plz update soon. this is one of my favorites now! i love it!

Omg. I like ur story! It's interesting. I can't help but to think what comes next. Keep up the great work and UPDATE SOON!

Wait...Im confuzzeld.

Both Yuki and Takai love Mika(Midori) but she loves Yuki. Takai always makes her feel better when Yuki is mean to her...so who does she like in the end? Man, my brain hurtz just thinking about it. Well, hurry up and post the next chaptah. Its , like, nagging at my brain...AND THAT MAKES IT HURT EVEN MORE!

(Waiting for next chaptah)

Stupid, stupid, Takai...

If he didnt want Yuki to find out about Midori then why did he tell him that he had already found her. Jeeze what a nimrod...no offence to anyone...

Hey, I think I would look cute with purple hair. (Dont let any of my friendz know cause they'd drag me to a hair salon to get it done.)

Great chaptah

Love this chapter just like I loved all the other ones. You are seriously talented at writing this stuff! Can you sometime, maybe, check out one of my stories...Pwees?

I need your expert advice!

Hehehe...(nervous laugh)

I really liked this chapteh. Other people may say that Yuki is the cutest of them all, but I have to dissagree. I think Takai is. But thats only my veiw for a few reasons.

1) He sounds like the kid I like at school

2) He sounds like a great kisser (sick, i know. but its still my point of veiw)

3) I just found out that I am a sap for Romance Manga about a month ago. (I know. Thats not a reason to like Takai better than Yuki but oh well. So sue me if i dont like everthing that other people like.)

Yeah, this reveiw is turning out to be one of the longest reveiws that i have ever left on a site. So you should feel very proud of yourself for making such great stories! Please continue on with every single one of them. They all rox!

-The Writer, E. Watson-

(Please dont kill me...)

Hehehehe...

Mwahahahahaha...

Rawr...

Uh...

Okay, Im starting to scare myself

Anywayz, love this chapter, love this story!

I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it, I love it! I LOVE IT!

I think that says it all.