Wow. Creepy. Cool though. A look into a psychopathic stalker's mind. Cool.

...creepy as hell.

...good luck, you guys...

Very well done. A twisted set of mind.

Yup. I actually remembered your fictionpress penname _. Yay.

This was a really good one-shot, if you can call it that on this site. The brief description is just detailed enough to give the reader a sense of loss, of knowing what could have been. So sad.

*gulps* That is really creepy. Gah! I'm going to stop thinking about it...

but it was really good. Yeah. really good.

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hey Ebony-chan!

...Wow...that was creepy...ish...

I liked it, nicely done. And creepy

whoa that was really good. it was original and slightly odd, but that is always a good thing to see on this site. excellent work

Goddamn that's freaky. And I thought I had problems...

Incredible short story though.

This was really good! Graphically beautiful, and just...well...well written!