You set this out in a really intersting way. The unusual process of taking the second line from the previous stanza to start the next one really tied the poem together. Once I noticed that, I started following the lines to see where they went. I really like your stuff. :)

I need to learn how to tango again... bet Fred would go nuts for it... seeing as it's all romanticised and stuff. I love this poem, it really catches the dance.