Reviews for Omundor's Daughters – Forbidden

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Saved By Blood 2007-10-26 ch 17,	I read this story in one night. It was THAT good. So intriguing. I was hooked from the beginning! ;P It might need a little proofreading though. Otherwise, excellent story!
Shot Glass 2007-08-15 ch 18,	Amazing. You're so so very imaginative, and I love it! Keep up the good work (and you can be sure I'll be reading the sequel)
Angel of Ink 2007-03-02 ch 10,	I like this story, but your grammar is kind of bad and I think Berek and Emmeline are moving too fast. She hasn't even known him for two weeks. No one in their right mind would make out with a prisoner they've known that long, even if he isn't a criminal.
Shadow of the Black Wolf 2007-02-22 ch 18,	A sequel would be very nice. I liked this story a lot and I like Berek. I hope you decide to do a sequel.
Solana 2007-01-02 ch 17,	I feel bad for not reviewing every chapter so I'll just leave you a nice long review at the end. First of all, I just found this story for the first time like, two hours ago and I read the whole thing in one sitting. It was fantastic. The idea was supremely original and interesting and I love you're writing, as well as your characters (Berek is a smexy beast). I really hope you get around to writing a sequel, as well as Alisa (I was disappointed we didn't find out more about her). The only criticism I have is simply a gramatical one. You kept switching back and forth between present and past tense. In one sentence you would say something like "it was" and in the very next, you'd switch to present tense and say "it is". This was slightly annoying and made a few passages just a bit hard to follow (I didn't notice you doing it so much toward the end as you had at the beginning, but I think that was probably just a result of me being so caught up in the story that the grammer didn't get me all that fussed). But like I said, the story was amazing, and I can't wait for more!
toxic-noodle725 2006-10-20 ch 18,	great story. although its very short, its still good.
Love is a Ring Toss game 2006-09-13 ch 1,	:)
Fifine 2006-08-03 ch 17,	Hello ! I just read your whole story and I'm not disappointed. It was quite good (I love romances...lol). I thought it was of the fantasy genre (another genre i love) but in fact it's more a science fiction story. I liked the characters very much and switching between both Emmeline and Berek's point of views was a good idea in this case. I liked also the fact that you chose the internal point of view to develop the psychology of the characters. All in all, it was an enjoyable reading. What I found strange though, was the fact that Berek is from a different planet, he's nerver heard of Earth before, yet he can understand Emmeline without any difficulty, he knows also the names of the clothes Emmeline are wearing (he recognizes the jeans, for example), etc...There were those kinds of details, not very important here since the goal was to write a romance (and it was a good romance, one that I liked anyway lol) but that I found incoherent in the setting of the story. And if you want to write a sequel, I'm all for it. I'll be glad to read what will happen to Emmeline and Berek :P I'll wait until you decide to put your notes on your computer :) Keep writing !
cherrypiesizzle 2006-04-12 ch 17,	That's it? It seems so...so...incomplete! What's to become of those two? What happens if Berek has to leave?
KittyCatSomethingorAnother 2006-03-11 ch 18,	it's a great story I've never really seen something quiet like it. You have some imagination.
breakmyheart 2005-10-16 ch 17,	aw i love the story!
LcT514 2005-07-20 ch 18,	this story was really great and an amazing and enjoyable read that was worth the time
Devil dog 2005-07-19 ch 18,	awesome great amazening
FSlSlayer 2005-07-12 ch 17,	HAHA!! NICE!
FSlSlayer 2005-07-12 ch 16,	LOL!! WOOHOO! PLZ WRITE MORE!

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