so warm and tender :)

Great poem.

Aw! Very nice! I loved "is like being able to breathe underwater". I've never heard a kiss described like that before. Very cute, I adored it. Great work, keep it up! .

This is sweet and oh so beautiful! I love it! Keep on writing :)

enjoyably read, vivid descriptions and good series of metaphors. -ADD

Your taste of wordsUndeniably...Is what you are...But hmm...I now wonder...It is sudden...But my questions are not for you to answer...I'll wonder on

. I'll say... Wonderful! Keep it up! & don't worry, somehow I'll keep my words or die trying :p

aw... thats so sweet i loves it, yet, i have yet to experience it lol going to fav this is

eloquent. it flows very well and just beautiful! )

Wonderful, I just love it.

beautifully captured...

::bows head:: Beautiful. And true.

YAY! haha, great work! _

every line is so beautiful!

A breeze so gentle,—

Sweetest dew upon red lips,—

Moon's soft touch on grass.

—Two little starlings,

Flit about those of yours,—

When you choose to kiss.

—Slighty parted mouth,

Softly exhaling Thy breath,—

Rose perfume on lips.

—Ripe papaya kiss,

Orange summer's melody,—

Ecstacy and bliss.

—Butterflies flutter,

Glowing strange delights loiter,—

Fantasies of touch.

—Iridescent pink,

Filling all that's just been green,—

Blooming into red.

the ending kinda sums it all up very sweet and nice similies too