Sasuke0 Kun here. I finally read it all and what can say it needs a lot of editing but that can be done in the future, nice plot storyline and action, and did i mention funny! This needs to get published soon, cause i'd love to see this anime style!

Again another hillarous chapter. Laughter is a good thing, even thoug there are many errors. I wondered what he ment by clawed to death. I guess i dont want to know ethier.

Lol the action was funny. Jit pased out before delviering the final blow. U might want to revise again, the action is a little hard to follow, and at times i found my self lost and confused. But the humor is plus.

You have a great plot, but it's to long, and a lot of errors. ANd whats up with all the wierd names, but i'll read on.