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correlation 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseI really like the second and fourth haikus! Great job of putting detail and making it easy to think about the imagery in each poem.
ossining 2006-08-27 ch 1,	abuseWow, there are some great haikus in this bunch. I especially like the 6th one, about eyelashes. Using the word "break" at the beginning really makes it powerful. Nice. Just great work overall. Keep writing! :)
boys kiss girls 2006-03-18 ch 1,	abuseOh wow this is awesome. It totally reminds me of China. but I've never been to China. I've been to Chinatown though, with my friend and her family. We ate at this place called Phillipe's. It was really good. Anyway, I like the haiku's. All of them.
Sally-andersonn 2006-03-09 ch 1,	abuseHello. I'm not a poetry person, but I usually understand them. The wording was a litle odd. Though the vagueness gives it a poetic feel. Very abstract,but I don't think you express what you are trying to very well. You'll get better with time. keep writing. :)
Olivine 2006-02-20 ch 1,	abusemy favorite?? ...all of em xp. and its going in my favorites list. :) keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:\|:-
PacoTheCharm 2006-01-13 ch 1,	abuse"You slit my heartache With the brutal rose petals Purified cleansing." is my favorite. I enjoy your haikus, I´ve been reading around for haikus, and it has become a strage obsession. Great stuff, keep it up, i just loove how they blend.
scuttlebutt 2005-10-05 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. I'm terrible at writing any type of poetry but you really have a knack for this. I loved it. I don't have a favorite, they're all wonderful.
lifescrewsusall 2005-09-25 ch 1,	abuseooh i love haikus. really nice imagery. all of them together really draw a picture of your world.
Wesley Storm 2005-08-30 ch 1,	abuseI like the first, second, third, and seventh. Those seemed to have the most meaning, at least to me. Though I do think that you did a great job of creating beautiful stories in only three lines. Hikus are difficult and you are an excellent writer of them.
reluctant writer 2005-08-26 ch 1,	abuseThese were really good. I like the first two the best. [Colorful leaves fall/ Spinning like kamikaze/ Mind blowing descent.] I like that - "spinning like kamikaze."
Precious Death's Whisper 2005-08-01 ch 1,	abuseVery good! This has a mystical feel to it and it takes me to a different world. Keep it up! Write on! ~PDW
Falconer Aysel 2005-07-31 ch 1,	abuseAh, Miss Sarah. I am returning your gracious favor by examining your haikus, which are cute, by the by. As in accordance with your summary, I like the first one the best. It gives a peaceful, almost hopeful image to me I can hardly begin to explain. Wonderful job. Aysel
Royalty by Association 2005-07-31 ch 1,	abuseI really like these! My favorite is the first one. Wow, good job. Oh, and thank you for reviewing my work ;).
The Proxy Ninja 2005-07-24 ch 1,	abuseWow.. coming -right- from the Denny's poem, I had to totally switch gears. Lol! [Colorful leaves fall/Spinning like kamikaze/Mind blowing descent.] Turning leaves really -do- look like planes on fire, crashing into the ground! That's really awesome! I like this one, but -one- minor suggestion: [Break my eyelashes/Blow it off my fingertip/Wind caught wishes fly.] Maybe, "wind-caught", to stress the adjective. this is really beautiful. You and Lavender Hail write some great haikus. Lavender Hail is in my favorite stories with this large collection of haikus, Bell Anima Terrible, I think.. If you're bored, go and enjoy them! Admittedly, though, I really like these and the Denny ones a little better. I think it depends on my mood or something, ne? Wonderful job, Brighteyes.
elizabeth ebony 2005-07-23 ch 1, anon.	abusewhoops did i write moonbeam enhanced? that was my old pen-name sorry its erased the enhanced bit anyway i think oh well write on E~Ebony.

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