I look at a photo on the table

a boy huggin' a shy girl

your image fades

I just stay alone.

Ist ein wunderbarer Schluß. Das könnte fast ein eigenes Gedicht sein.

Beautiful song.

Twilight Starr

I loved this, it was amazing. great job, this is a favourite, definately

extremly heart breaking. love the disjointed thoughts that almost trail off to start another, they add to the effect of someone upset contemplating a relationship. great stuff, love the opening lines- they really caught me into the poem.