omg i loved it, its amazing, escpecially the clarity of the step five part

Heyy Ally. It's James, also known as J. Stewart.

I don't know if I left you a review before, but incase I didn't, you know who I am. I think that you are a very talented writer/poet and you have a bright future ahead of you.

I must go now. This was a very interesting poem and it was of course, well written. I think that you will prove victorious in life.

Not just so what if u die! We'd all miss you too much and stuff like this which I just seem to be unloading on us lately, liked the new style too.

Great work, as always. I really liked this one a lot for some reason. I loved the steps at the begining. I don't think any one ever commits suicide with out testing it first... at least once. Keep up the good work

Awsome poem just one thing you can't give up there alot of people that care about you so please don't give up _

Don't go! Please!

I love you! Rosanna loves you!

WE ALL LOVE YOU GODDAMNIT!

that was really good, you really portrayed the emotions so well. it really captured my attention. beautifully written.

how EMO

short-ish, but that was fine. it was really good. error: Don’t worry about me, so what if I die.' should have a question mark. oh and just a thought, would you really want to bleed to death?

I would worry, and I do care about you. don't let her win

you captured this so well. I really felt this and was so heavily affected by the words used in this, powerful play and beautifully done. emotional and ridden with good angst, lovely if a bit meloncholic. but with out the meloncholy it wouldn't be angst? :P *dies laughing* XDD lovely poem though, so emotionally done and beautiful.

!* noelle *!

Wow, very powerful. I love it, great detail and description of emotion, great job.

Very nice! I DEFINETLY have to show that to my friend! Great Job.

beautiful...really captures your emotions, and i know if you keep writing you can hold on...keep holding on, i know you can...

muchLUB-kerr