|Reviews for Dead ends|
| SJMiddleton 6/1/05 . chapter 1
I liked it. the description was great. good work, keep it going.-Sav
| Nobody-n-Particular 5/28/05 . chapter 1
Very nice. I like the thoughts.
| Gaki Toki 5/28/05 . chapter 1
Don't worry, I don't make these huge reviews because I'm bored, I make them because I feel like I have something worth while to say, because I feel as if I have connected with the author through their poetry or stories. I'm not a poetry person. I know you want me to write more but I fear it. I hate writing it because every subject has been written about. I dislike reading certain poetry because it is so cliched. Yet...if you look at mine it is the same thing, just another cliche molded into different words. That's all. This was a great poem, not only because others can relate, but because you could just see yourself walking through your mind, a labrinth of tunnels, water dripping down the walls and the sqeals of the rats echoing through the damp chambers. You wander with a flashlight, looking for any type of light, of hope, but all is lost when you come along those signs and you have to turn back...turn back with no breadcrumbs to lead you to where you started. Completely lost in a world of darkness. Are you sure my influence on you is bad celentia? Or do you just think that it's not your place to ramble on reviews? Don't worry, I just did. People love long reviews, they don't care how pointless, they care that YOU care. And in turn, that's what I care about. Well, good luck with the writing and don't worry, someone out there understands. All you have to do is find them.
Much Love, Gaki Toki
| Bittersweetwriting 5/25/05 . chapter 1
its excellent, kinda spooky:) but good
| ckk 5/23/05 . chapter 1
Nice work, it feels like that alot for me.
| citrus scented 5/23/05 . chapter 1
oh wonderfully sad, tragic raw and dark. great, i lov the ending lines they really leave you with something.