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| simpleplan13 2005-05-25 ch 1,  | abusepowerful & true |
| Cry Tears of Darkness 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abusewow very powerful and nice ezxpressions. nice writing. true and real issues |
| printed-peppermint 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseGood job! This is very well written, and I like it a LOT!! My only suggestion is to look at word choice, but you really don't have to. Anyways, keep it up, you're a great poet! |