iteresting format. i like the mix up of this piece; how the ideas keep on changing.

EB

oh! that was really cool

awesome.. love the ending

thanks for your review

I smirked at alot of these lines. Not in cynical amusement but in understandment, just the pure fact all of this fits in this anguished world. It's beautiful distortion, lol. Ignore my psychoticness...

ANNA

Nice. I really like this, and even though it came from a bunch of stuff, it sounds like it's all part of the same story. I hope that's how you intended it. : ) Anyway, I really liked that one line "I Don't Get It Why I Even Care." It reminds me about big problems, stuff that like is too painful to care about, and little stuff that you're amazed you can care about.