This is a great poem. Wow. I love the shallow idolation part, and the last 2 lines are great. Nice nice poem.

I like it. Is s h a l l o w i d o l a t i o n. a real word? If it is cool if it isn't AWESOME! very good!

I love the descriptions, they work really well. The change of subject was good, if a little confusing.

"Pin-up idol falsehoods" - nice observation

It's enough for me to watch you smile --and know you'll never know.

love that line. Maybe cause I'm like that. Wonderful job on this.

wow... so deep.