I think this story is really well-written... If I may ask though, what is the age difference between Takeo and Shori? Because personnally, I think the age difference would make a difference in his reaction... otherwise though, this is really good. I'm enjoying it. ^_^

great story so far i like ur other one lover too.

i like this story alot! put up the next chapter up soon!

Hehehehe...

Must see what happens in the next chaptah. MUST SEE WHAT HAPPENS!(face looks like a zombie) So update soon, Okay! (face turns sweet and voice goes all high pitch)

Mwahahahahaha!

Dude! I wish I could throw an allarm clock through a door. And splinter it into a gajillion peices!

Onto chaptah 8

Makoto sounds like a hunk...(drools at thought)

Cant wait to see what comes next!

Great chaptah!

Onto da next one!

I choose...the last one...LOL JK!

This was a great chapter, but not the best one.I still want to find out who is their mighty night in shining armor! w00t!

OH! I know where she is...no i dont...

Well onto the next chapter to find out.

All of the really cute guys in your stories have brown hair! (Yay for hotties with brown hair!)

Onto the next frontier!

I love how she is so nice to her younger brother, and yet doesnt take any crap from anyone else!

They dont have to be poor to fit in...they could be middle class...I...guess...

Onto the next chaptah'! ~.^ -(I love this little winky guy!)

i like it!i just have to read the rest

I LOVE soulmate it is awesome and who the HELL is this LOLLY whatever her mane is to say that chapter 7 is out of place because she ain't ewven writing the ** story in the first place... stupid ** **! sorry but u know I had 2 say that my BFF knows wat she's doin!

Its very interesting, I have a story sorta like this, well not really it just has demons so it really isn't. Anyways cool story (lost track)

hi! i have a question. how do u put pics on ur fictionpress bio?