I love your story! I'm guessing you're not going to continue it but I still hope you do! It has an amazing plot AND it pulls at a person's heartstrings. Believe me when I say that my eyes started to water in this chapter! I love it!

Being a pirate sucks... oh well, it makes for one hell of a story. Please don't abandon this story!

lol, i will never understand why he let Avery rape him.

lol, he wanted a story, and he got one. XP

lol, 50 foot (or more) jungle gym

that is an odd requirement to have to sleep with someone.

so is Dominick supposed to know where the treasure is?

I was wondering when you're going to update?

This is a good story so far, especially for a pirate story. I wonder if Dominick will really leave the ship and if he does what will happen. Good story and I hope you take it off hold soon.

:) Interesting! I like it a lot more than I thought and I hope that you update a lot sooner.

hm yummy i love pirates...this is a great story!! cant wait for the next chapter.

This is great. Why did you stop updating? Well, I hope you'll continue.

Please don't stop this one! You're an awesome writer...so keep going:)

This is story is just so grate! The caracteres are interesting and complex, the pirate scene so sexy. I do like that the caracteres are not so young and that they are not in school, is a differential. Please, not let it sidelined. You're excellent!

ooh!I love pirate stories! yay! you must update!