yeah, good idea and all. but like the others said, way too dramatic at the beginning. he doesnt seem very suave or womanizing till he realizes he is dead and a ghost (which, by the way, he seems way too ready and willing to accept). sick premise though.

woah...trippy...i agree with that other person that it might be a tad melodramatic at the start, but you make up for it with badass Ky at the end. Keep going, its awesome...and guess how many days till our birthday?? TWO!! =D

i think the main charachter needs a new name..."'josh' the ghost" just doesn't sound right. the beginning's also a teensy bit... melodramatic... as far as josh and stacey being all wishy washy and stuff... but it's a really interesting premise, and it would be cool to see what you can do with it.

Hey! i like the opening, it's really good! Um, as a for another title, how about Poltergeist or something? Just thouhgt i'd get that in!