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| Fantazolic 2007-03-14 ch 1,  | abuseReally interesting poem. Stereotyping people or labeling them is really low just because they might- like you mentioned- get good grades, or like sports or even just because they're a girl. I particularly liked that 'Just because I'm a girl..' stanza. Really well written and great idea! Great work, Fantazolic |
| Katsuragi and Empress 2006-11-21 ch 1, | abusePoint taken. ^^ very well written. ~Roku |
| mtninejr87 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWhat you say is so true. Everything you described affects me personally. Especially about being a teen. I'm in my last teenage year of 19 but I am still treated as if I'm a trouble-making teenager. Good job. |
| Masavi 2006-03-10 ch 1, | abuse:) I love this. ...and I'm all those things you mentioned, too, so I'm TOTALLY for it. |
| rrmehta364 2006-02-28 ch 1, | abuseCongrats for getting this published. Stereotypes can definately be annoying at times. |
| Kaggr 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuse^^ Hits a nice message. |
| dancerintheroom 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! This world would be a much bett place if more people thought like you... |
| TirzahRuth 2005-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem and agree with it wholeheartedly. I like your thinking. Congrats on getting it published. |
| miss whoever 2005-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem! Perfect - its no surprise that it would be published keep on writing |
| Autumn Dance 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abuseThat's really clever- I like the one about being a girl. This shouts flair and flourish. It's fantastic. Thank you for reviewing my Dandelion Tea Piece. It's meant to be psycotic, so thats why it's nothing to do with Tea! I shall check out some of your other work, so keep it up! Love Becki x |
| Plinky 2005-10-16 ch 1, | abuseWOw, great poem, I totally agree. And I love the way you seem to be able to make it rhyme without it sounding forced. Really good! Thanks for the reviews and keep writing! |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2005-10-12 ch 1, | abuse*Very* well done. I really liked this. It has such a powerful message and flows really well. Great job! Ur story seems interesting and I will try to get around to it as soon as I have a spare moment. Great job! |
| Eyetk 2005-09-30 ch 1, | abuseApoligies for not returning your review earlier! Nice work! It rings true on so many levels. However, your might want to be careful with your phrasing, there. Saying that people like to stereotype you can be considered stereotyping people in generally, you know! On the whole--well done! Rhymes aren't forced...good use of italics...cheers on the excellent poem! |
| Gigi 2005-09-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey I just came from your bio page and I saw this and am I llike hm" So I read it and am going "Impressive" Yeah . Great constructive criticism isnt it? I like your poetry structure, I think it is very well thought out and I just bet this was a blurb for you. It sounds so very natural. Anyway... god luck.. I like you screenname. Gigi PS I dont have an account here yet. So srry. |
| gabriellafaith 2005-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI really like this. It's so true! Thanks for the review on The Arena, anyways. Chapter two is up if you cared to read any longer. Great poem! Keep writing! gabriellafaith |