This is good, good job!

XD WooHoot! Jesse is getting kinky now a days! XD Great job Love. Sorry, wasn't here yesterday so I'm a little behind on my r/r but I loved this (of course)!

Morbid Maxwell- He's the black widow, oh!

Powerful imagery, I especially value the one at the beginning. I like the fact that you do not write about cutting directly but describe it in such inventive images, this makes your poem stand out from the many others on this subject that are found on this site.

very well written...i really like this...well done...its amazing. lots of love AllyCred