excellent work, one of my fav. poems:)

...makes me think of two charas. yet I'm not sure which two...but again, I loved! I hope to be on soon to r/r so, if I'm late, sorry!

Morbid Maxwell- He's the black widow, oh!

Beautiful, dreamy imagery!

i really like this well done...its amazing...very vivid and beautifully described...i love it. lots of love AllyCred

I really liked it. I don't really understand the line "And hope my warmth." I really liked the rhyming in the last three lines. Nice job.

Best Wishes,Brittney

I really liked the imagery, especially lines like "the moon your protector". Great closing line too. Very sad poem, but something everyone can relate to, at least in some way.

-TCS

whoo-hoo! TEEN AGE REBILLION ALL THE WAY ! YES!

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Write on, this is great.