Up...date. Extrememly cruel with the cliffy O

oh my god no you HAVE to update soon -no NOW please please please when i saw there was no chapter 4 i was GUTTED please updsate, you write v ery well and i love this!

omgomg I love this one too :D update lmao this story is sexy XD

No no it doesn't suck! It's awesome! There are some minor grammar mistakes and typos. Hoho! Very realistic. I love it *squee*

I hate that... I start reading a great story, and get totally sucked into it then I have to wait for the next chapter. Please update soon, it's a great story.

Only a few questions, how old our Eli and Caden? What do they look like, twins? And how old, round about is Jualian?

Blackmail! Oh no!

OMG I love it! Yay for twincest! I cant wait for more! Update soon!

That was an awesome perspective on Caden. Looking forward to more!

Dude! Don't stop! I want more!

Holy fuck! LOL! that was awsome and extremely well written. Way to push the envelope on that one. I really enjoyed and was on the edge of my seat the entire frigging time I read it! ohmigod ohmigod!

Holy cow, that was sick! I am extremely interested in seeing where in the hell you take this. I feel really sorry for your main character, I want something good to happen to him, but you made me want more and more bad! Brilliant! I hope you continue this! I like it, but be prepared for some hate mail!

Again, awsome job. Sick, sick, story, but well written enough to qualify for its own soap! loved it.

Blessed Be!