 Super.Secret.Music.Mission. 2009-03-02 . chapter 1This was hilarious! My sister and I are only five years apart, but she's still just so aggravating...she's such a sweetie, but really, quite a devil in disguise. You did a great job of showing that rivalry here. :) |
 Celtic Dancer 2006-02-26 . chapter 1This was great; had me laughing. I know what younger siblings can be like, and I also have a 6-year-old sister. It's almost as if their sole purpose in life is ruining yours, isn't it? |
 bongogirl 2006-01-04 . chapter 1I like it. Just like my roadtrip last summer (bad memories) |
 Lonely Forest 2005-06-26 . chapter 1Excellent story! Very funny, very truthful. The Silent Game. I know that all to well...the counsellors at this camp used to make us play it...for hours at a time...while they ate chips and talked...WHAT A CRAPPY CAMP! Argh.
Well, thanks for the great story, at was really enjoyable- and you're on my favorite author's list! |
 Dibsthe1 2005-06-23 . chapter 1 I like that this was written from the older kid's viewpoint. It's older kids who are actually the underdogs, being expected to endure perpetual motion hair shirts like these.
"Chalk and cheese have calcium, we have DNA" was brilliant!
I loved it when Sarah suggests the game of Who can be the quietest?
Those vows to be "A Better Bigger More Adult than an Adult" sibling always seem to be taken right at the very second those younger ones take THEIR vows to be even bigger brats.
Oh, and by the way...
Teenage siblings help their younger siblings "to grow in the world" by showing them what happens when they push their luck too far!! |
 CircusCandy 2005-06-03 . chapter 1yeah, I can so relate. But I got two brothers and (since I'm a guy), I'll use physical force (such as a slap in the face) when they ** me off or annoy me. I hate family vacations. I love your stories. Good job! |
 Aibari 2005-05-27 . chapter 1Hee. I loved the humor in this one. And trust me, Sarah is lucky. At least her sister never bit her... :S |
 SoLiTaRyInSaNiTy 2005-05-25 . chapter 1it's a very cute story! based on your life? you don't have to answer. i really enjoyed it and i like your use of the first person narrator, which i can't do as well as you did. if you have time, swing by my profile and check out my story. |
 account not in use 2005-05-24 . chapter 1Heh, so true for all us older sibs. Fuuny and good! |