very deep. I love it. This reminds me of my past..and present, but I guess I shouldn't rant.

Sorrow

So short but with such strong meaning! The purpose lying in the words of this is strong. :) Keep up the great work, hope to see more like this soon! Write on!

PDW

Very beautiful, easy to relate to. Simple but deep and I like your word usage. queenvixta

cool part about fiction, really makes me think, i like this, short but says a hell of a lot to me x weasel within x

so short n to the point, nice

short but gud :D