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| Atropa Belladonna87 2007-01-25 ch 1,  | abusethat was way dark dude! it made me shudder. good work, good build up of character as the person speaks. but man! that was dark. |
| Kiyura 2007-01-16 ch 1, | abuseI wanted to leave you a review since you have The Deceiver on your favs list...so I came to this! And wow, this is insane! I love it! Seriously. Craziness is like the best thing ever. I love how you don't find out about the whole 'daughter' thing until the end...or how he seems to actually believe that he was doing the right think. I don't know, it's incredibly eerie but I really did like it. The uninterrupted flow of dialogue is an interesting style, and it works well here. Great job! |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very powerfully graphic and touching. I love the style it was written in. All dialog. Very interesting way to reach a reader. I can perfectly visualize the distress in the speaker. |
| chaintree 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was odd... and dark... I liked it- don't get me wrong; yet it was indeed differant. |
| Embrace The Sky 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThat's was freakin' awesome... Wow... |
| Adonia Chesser 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, different, it was good though. |