That's pretty good. It's hard to get the old Gods into modern poetry, but you managed it. I enjoyed the imagery of Indifference personified. Well done.

I love the mythology... especially astrology... A deep message, deffinately.

In my own goofy opinion, go ahead and hunt the twins...

Geminis are always so mean to me. lol

Nice work and keep it up!

*Sita

-whistles- Actually pretty good. My writing usually isn't that dark, but occasionally it tends to move in that !KD

Hm, interesting idea. I kind of like it. Not the poem (which I like very much), but the idea. Your writing is very good.

"Tomorrow I hunt the twins." ACK!