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Reviews For: Aries' Head is Hanging on My Wall

Morgan Coldsoul
2006-10-25
ch 1,
abuseThat's pretty good. It's hard to get the old Gods into modern poetry, but you managed it. I enjoyed the imagery of Indifference personified. Well done.
Sita Fuoco
2005-07-18
ch 1,
abuseI love the mythology... especially astrology... A deep message, deffinately.

In my own goofy opinion, go ahead and hunt the twins...

Geminis are always so mean to me. lol

Nice work and keep it up!

*~Sita
Karine Dragon'sheart
2005-05-31
ch 1,
abuse-whistles- Actually pretty good. My writing usually isn't that dark, but occasionally it tends to move in that direction.Laters!KD
tastes like love
2005-05-23
ch 1,
abuseHm, interesting idea. I kind of like it. Not the poem (which I like very much), but the idea. Your writing is very good.
sueb262
2005-05-23
ch 1,
abuse"Tomorrow I hunt the twins." ACK!!
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