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| Morgan Coldsoul 2006-10-25 ch 1, | abuseThat's pretty good. It's hard to get the old Gods into modern poetry, but you managed it. I enjoyed the imagery of Indifference personified. Well done. |
| Sita Fuoco 2005-07-18 ch 1, | abuseI love the mythology... especially astrology... A deep message, deffinately. In my own goofy opinion, go ahead and hunt the twins... Geminis are always so mean to me. lol Nice work and keep it up! *~Sita |
| Karine Dragon'sheart 2005-05-31 ch 1, | abuse-whistles- Actually pretty good. My writing usually isn't that dark, but occasionally it tends to move in that direction.Laters!KD |
| tastes like love 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseHm, interesting idea. I kind of like it. Not the poem (which I like very much), but the idea. Your writing is very good. |
| sueb262 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuse"Tomorrow I hunt the twins." ACK!! |