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| a common mistake 2005-10-28 ch 1,  | abuseMm, truly terrific chapter! Is this a one-shot? Meh. Wonderful! Update soon... |
| birdytamel 2005-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abusewtf. i shall kill theo. you do NOT do that. i mean... *pulls out hair* ARG! stupid stupid stupid boy. so freaking BLIND. well, do continue... though it's an excellent one-shot, even of the end leaves the possibility for continuation. |
| elysian dreamer 2005-08-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice start and interesting story so far. You haven't updated for a while. *sniff* Are you going to continue with this story? |
| kaika switched 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuseNice start. I hope you add more to it soon! Keep writing! |
| TwystedFate 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic. Lovely. Can't wait for updates. |
| trundlealongnow 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abusePleasse keep on writing. It's the beginnings of a really good story. Looks like it could be really funny as well! |
| mistressKC 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI'm intrigued - I hope you write more |
| Tilly 2005-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuselike it so far. it's a pretty good start. hope you continue. |
| Mike 2005-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseDude this is good. I like it. I hope you continue with it. |
| chthonical 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThis isn't a one-shot, is it? Because even though it's just one chapter, my sympathies are already hooked. It's written really well, and I want to know what happens next--give her a happy ending? |