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| ittybittytreefrog 2006-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseThat's great! I liked the effect of the changes in location of the stanzas. Great ending. |
| topaz07 2006-04-21 ch 1, | abuseAh, another wonderful piece. I love your world The Fay are wonderful people and deserve this. Many Blessings. |
| xxLuvoxx 2005-06-08 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem and the design is pretty nice! :) |
| swaggering curses 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is gorgeous! I'm a rabid tree-hugger so I'm totally agreeing with you. I especially like the stanza about "And what do human eyes behold..." Lovely imagery and I like the rhyming. =) |
| Lisa Parry 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this a lot, shame about the sad ending but the build up towards captured their good spirit in a mood of lightness. The alternating verse strucutres brought the message more cleaarly to the forefront. The beauty of nature was captured brilliantly :) |