whoa...

oh wow... this tirade of blood sweat tears and then the last lines where he just doesn't give a fuck. (y)(y)(y)

I feel like the boy now, with guilt all over me. and your words have me by the throat.

wow this is everything i have always wanted to say in a poem and you do it so well. keep writing you;re amazing :D

That was so powerful and explicit, it was so amazing. Gah, it's just too much perfection in one poem. There's so much here that I've wanted to say in my poems but you seemed to have beat me to it.

I feel like I understand it's meaning...but I also feel like I'm wrong.