I love Travis, hehe. Though I think I rather like Reginald even more :D anyways, loved the story. *bows*

awesome work!

:( Poor Travis, what a jerk.. I'm glad he got away.

Neat! Shame you have to break it into two stories like that, tho. Poor Travis. I hope things work out for him, but I guess I won't find out 'till tomorrow...

BTW, when people comment on WHAT you wrote instead of HOW it was written, you can take that as a good thing. Because it means we forgot that we were reading a story. :)

Yay! 30th review. XD;

This is a great story. I love one-shots so much, and it was great to watch this unfold, so much quicker than your normal stories, but just as involved. Great, realistic dialogue, great prota- and antagonists.

I don't have much to say except that I read it, liked it, and am now reading the continuation. I rather wish I knew more about Max, though. He comes across as somewhat inhuman in his uncaring. Does he feel /anything/ for Travis? Why was he so obsessed with keeping Travis hidden? Did he date anyone on his public face, or was he listed in magazines as the city's most eligible bachelor?

i so luv the linking stories *_* yay! XD

Adding you! TTFN! ;)

Why did I ever stop reading your work? I must be insane or something. This was absolutly wonderful. I'm glad he got away from the idiot. Max is like my ex-boyfriend, the kind of person who belongs to be jail but isn't. Ah well, keep up the wonderful work and I promise to read more of your stories.

*sobs* Good for him! Travis deserves to be happy! I loved this story! *sniffle*

Oh. My. GOD! That was AMAZING! I love how you made the whole story come together; I like the confrontation at the end where Travis stays firm (go Travis!) and how Reginald saves him from Max. GREAT JOB!

Sweet! I wonder why I always passed this story over? ~.*

I really thought that was a beautiful little story. I love how the minute that Travis left Max, everything ran so smoothly for him, almost as if it was fate for him to be alone. Your writing is of amazing talent...such beautiful stories! Well done love! xx

Great story, I liked the fact that he was able to make a really life of his own, if travis had gone back to Max i would have been **. Keep up the great writing!

Mmkay, so I read Brian's story and I love it to(I'm trying to find the sequal). But I had to comment on this one. Its so awesome! It makes me happy and giggle. Seriously, it's great. And no, I'm not good with words.

-Lily