Hello there... I haven't actually read anything in a while, so I was just wandering around and I really like this poem. It flows beautifully and the imagery is great. Nice job!

Wow, it's about me! I'm famous!

*squees*

*cough*

Anyway, I think you did a really great job in using imagery -- it's one of your strongest talents in your poetry. Keep it up! *big thumbs up* You win at life and all that.