i like to co write with other people! what story ideas do you have that you need help on?by the way i liked this story!XD

I'm killing two birds with one stone here with this review.First, I thought the short story was beautiful. :D (I'm so behind on your stories. it's all because I was gone so much at the beginning of my summer break)

ANd second, if the offer still stands (I hope you mean aim) my sn is RoknRolLyfStyl and I'd love to assist you in writing any day. n__n I have to warn you though, I'm rarely on aim. (more on msn, but that's okay) I will try my best to be on more frequently though.

I'll be your writing buddy if ya realy want. I don't have any storys posted cause I have very good ideas but just can't seem to write them down the way I want to. :)

that was good! I can't believe it's over!

my fictionpress ID is Esquirella. My yahoo messenger id is esquirella, and my AIM is esquirella1.

Hey! I would not mind helping you ^^ but sadly I would only be able to help with sorting ideas out and helping with character development lol i got a billion ideas and plots twists to offer if you want them! I would off to help co-write but i'm really tide up with my stories currently...stupid outlines.. lol anyways! If that helps at all my sn is ikim89

Very cool!

this story is too much like a combination of two currently posted stories here on FP... But let's just say this is an innocent mistake on your part with NO intention of repeating someone's work...obviously there are some story lines, settings, and plots that are constantly being re-used because you can add MANY MANY personal and origional ideas to make it your own...but i would be very very careful where you take this.Your other stories i'm amazed at how you start of very cliche and by the third chapter you've added your own spins... so just to let you know I'll be keeping watch to see just what you do with this story. So try and keep it your own kk? it's really not that hard.

Nice, nice!

Since you already let me read it and taunted me once about not being the first to give a review, well here it is! I already told you it could develop into a story...another thing I forgot to mention on the IM: I like the rose wings--very pretty.