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superheroesarereal
2006-05-22
ch 1,
abuseaw this made my eyes water...sorry, I've been super emotional lately =) this poem is really good though. It makes me think of this interpretive dance ballerina shows where the woman is on the floor dying and the man is prancing away and then there's this pool of water which reflects the woman's face and she's crying... o_0 good job though
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