Oh, wow. I know what caused this. You just made me very depressed.

I hate me.

truthfully, it sounds like something i'd write. It just doesn't seem as good as you other stuff for some reason. Keep trying.

Aww, sweety...have you tried talking to him, love? Poor thing...*offers hug* Love the poem...

-passes out- I love this song! Oh My God, Bree-san this is great! I can't begin to tell you how much I connect to this song and how well written this is! You always were the better writer between us. OMG, I can't get enough of this! Awesome! G2G then, see ya later... ~Tatianna Blusummers

I really liked this and I can definitely relate. It's very well written.

aw this was so sweet and sad, I loved the way you made it sound like a song, it has a great tune too ;)great job, I can't wait to read your next stuff! Keep it up!

-Zephyr Zaelza