sometimes it's better to just not say anything.

my, aren't you a patient girl?

undeniably beautiful. i like how the lines all short - it's like the speaker tried but couldn say more.

EB

I'm not sure I care much for the phrasing, though it does seem to fit with the short, choppy thoughts. Very strong and dramatic; good job of harnessing details of unjustified patience to reveal your emotions.