|Reviews for Forgotten|
| less-than-imperfect 6/17/05 . chapter 1
sometimes it's better to just not say anything.
my, aren't you a patient girl?
| Elizabeth Bilberry 6/2/05 . chapter 1
undeniably beautiful. i like how the lines all short - it's like the speaker tried but couldn say more.
| silverquill212 5/24/05 . chapter 1
I'm not sure I care much for the phrasing, though it does seem to fit with the short, choppy thoughts. Very strong and dramatic; good job of harnessing details of unjustified patience to reveal your emotions.