First of all i would like to say that i enjoyed that poem very much and i find it very good.

Secondly i would like you to understand that i do not want to have an email conversation with you for i do not like giving my email to those i do not know.

Thirdly, i would find it in the best intrest of everyone for anyone who reads my bio to kindly disregard any spelling errors because in my 14 years of existence i have found no use for spelling as of yet. And about the write/right thing i forget whether that was intentional or not.

In addition,sometimes i fell the deep and passionate desire to complain because people tend to listen to that most of the time unti l they actually know you. I could rant sing soothe or in other words make a very sweet and perky type of review or poem but i find it most direct to complain about all the crap that goes on in the world. Also i chose the shortest poem i could see because you obviously did the same thing to me and chose my worst thing ever. And (assuming) that you know the person i was talking about in the poem, you would understand how she can easily symbolize all that i hate in this world which i have recently figured out, is not all its cracked up to be. Maybe i semi disliked your america poem because i was really ticked off at everything that had happened to me, or maybe thats the way i really feel. Maybe utopia isnt really possible while people continue to stay the way they are. Maybe i disliked your sickeningly sweet poem because i had just read the thoughts of those who agreed with me and were beginning to demand change.

I find you overly content with almost everything and suprisingly spiteful for a med student. Well anyway reading my work wot really help u to understand how i feel but it might offer some insight

PSD

Dark, really reaches the emotions here.

Is this suppose to rhyme? It doesn't...hmm..i dunno wad to say about this piece. Except maybe that it's kind of short? Do keep writing =D

this is pretty good but you seem to have streached it too far to make it rhyme but i do the same thing sometimes so good job