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| lackluster 2005-08-01 ch 1,  | abusethe first two lines are magnificently portraied, and the rest of the poem is breath-taking. |
| addie pray 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseBleeding sardonic and beautiful fury. Well done. |
| Akhenaten 2005-05-26 ch 1, | abusewow... once again, MEPS! I really, really, really loved it. although I can't explain how much because there aren't enough words to say how awesome that was... |
| WiltingBlackRose 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseYou really are my inspiration. This is so true. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. you're very intelligent. The Viper Room- ah, where River Phoenix died in the arms of his brother. a reality show on MTV, but of course. |
| translucence 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI really like this one. It's so angry and tightly wound, scathing and emotional. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abusewow this is so true and again beautifully done. i love the "so very tragically teenaged". keep writing :D |