the first two lines are magnificently portraied, and the rest of the poem is breath-taking.

Bleeding sardonic and beautiful fury. Well done.

wow... once again, MEPS! I really, really, really loved it. although I can't explain how much because there aren't enough words to say how awesome that was...

You really are my inspiration. This is so true.

I loved it. you're very intelligent. The Viper Room- ah, where River Phoenix died in the arms of his brother. a reality show on MTV, but of course.

I really like this one. It's so angry and tightly wound, scathing and emotional.

wow this is so true and again beautifully done. i love the "so very tragically teenaged". keep writing :D